I do not have my peer review sheet back yet, but I am still working on revising and adding things to my work. During my conference we discussed putting my story section in with my describing the types of diabetes section. I am now working on tieing all of that in and i am also adding my quotations and references into my page. I need to make it intriguing to my readers because my audience is a younger demographic. I thought to try and get through to them adding a bit in about my experience would help appeal to them. I will post another blog when my peer review comes in.